Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Trip to anywhere

I go trip.
trip to anywhere

I pack my bag
and pat myself.

I feel amazed
and I don't feel scared

I enjoy the trip
and watch out not to trip
Everything is fun
and nothing is dumb

When I come back,
I feel that I want to pack
Posted by at

4 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 6, 2012 at 2:57 AM

    okay... Hello!!!!!!!!! ( I'm seungmin hong )

    ReplyDelete
  2. 9-Ha Seung JunJanuary 6, 2012 at 6:43 PM

    12- Euitae Lee






    Wednesday, January 4, 2012Trip to anywhere
    I go trip.
    trip to anywhere


    I pack my bag
    and pat myself.


    I feel amazed
    and I don't feel scared


    I enjoy the trip
    and watch out not to trip
    Everything is fun
    and nothing is dumb


    When I come back,
    I feel that I want to pack
    Posted by 12-Lee Euitae at 5:04 PM Email ThisBlogThis!Share to TwitterShare to Facebook1 comments:
    Unknown said...
    okay... Hello!!!!!!!!! ( I'm seungmin hong )

    January 6, 2012 2:57 AM

    Post a Comment



    Older Post Home
    Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom) Higuain


    Iker casillas


    Christiano Ronaldo


    About Me

    12-Lee Euitae
    View my complete profile
    My Blog List
    Ms. Palomo's Winter Camp Blog Followers

    ReplyDelete
  3. HeavinlyJanuary 9, 2012 at 8:54 AM

    This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  4. HeavinlyJanuary 9, 2012 at 8:55 AM

    Your ode is very simple, but its message is strong. It feels breezy and natural. I liked especially the second and the last verse because they freed my constrained soul.
    Since your thought is simple but strong, try to write longer and more sophisticatedly. You will do good job! -TA Hyebin

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)