Sunday, January 8, 2012

Soccer

Do you like soccer?? Most of the people will say, ''yes!". People might have seen players playing soccer at field. I played soccer when I was 1st grader. When I went to school I saw the ball flying to me with very fast speed. I jerked and avoided me from getting hit. At that time, I started playing soccer. When I went to play soccer at lunch time, I was very scared because ball was very fast. One time I was hit by the ball above the eye, so my skin over the eye was ripped. It was very painful. But I didn't stop playing soccer.

Now I want to ask you one more question. If you play soccer, what position do you play??      
First, I played striker. That time, I scored many goals but it didn't interested me. But, when my class's goal keeper got hurt, I become a goal keeper for one game, but it was very good!! It interested me, so I started playing as a goalkeeper. When I first started playing goal keeper, I was very bad at it, but after time passes, I got better and better. Now, I became the best goal keeper in my class.

Doing the soccer makes me more patient and made me get one lesson.
" No one can do good at their first try, To be good, you need to practice and practice. If you keep practicing, one day you will find you are very good at that."

2 comments:

  1. Oh, you like playing soccer? Me, either. I hope your soccer ability increases. Fighting!

    ReplyDelete
  2. ET,

    Good story. I wish that your second body had more details on how you overcame your fear of soccer. This would have made your essay structure stronger. Watch out for errors in phrasing, use of tenses, and use of proper vocabulary.

    ReplyDelete